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And She Dreams


ebony tress-ed Aphrodite
marvels at the azure hued sky
in adulated enchantment

her mouth of crimson
an apparition of loveliness and grace

fleshy pouting lips

...and she dreams

A contest entry

CANDY CLOUDS OF LULLABY

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  • Hope Angel silver member
    November 9, 2008
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    Oh this is beautiful....
    Thank you for entering
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