Desire Floats Away

crimson cheeks aglow
with blazing desires
unaware of what will become

blue eyes crying
with withered hopes
of unfulfilled hopes and dreams

...and desire floats away

A contest entry

desires... by PrabhuDayal Khattar. 300 points, ended October 24, 2008, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
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AP family/time to have a contest! by bladesrsharp. 850 points, ended January 10, 6 entries
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bladesrsharp
December 28, 2008
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wonderfull write, it spoke to me think i know where your commin from, good luck!

PrabhuDayal Khattar
October 23, 2008

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yes true story of the life you portrayed with the honest emotions of your heart..I love it..and my thanks for entering my contest...

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