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Smudges Across the Sky

Colors smearing all together,
A smudged rainbow in the sky.

A sunset embroiders the heavens.
So beautiful, I could die.

Angels showing appreciation to the Earth
Telling everyone how proud they are of us.

A contest entry

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  • feetus
    October 24, 2008
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    Short & sweet bringing a smile.
    Thanks for entering & g'luck in the contest


  • Olivias Violin
    October 23, 2008
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    Very good!