Bewildered and confused,
nothing new these days,
head in a spin,
don't know where to begin.
Tried every thing I know,
but carn't make you see,
you don't want to understand,
what your doing to me.
I tell you time again,
there is only you,
some how ,that's not
good enough for you.
You may think It's not fair,
for me to say this way,
but I'm a poet you see,
and my feelings are flowing free.
My words I mean true,
if only you knew.
A contest entry
- What Are You Feeling Inside? by Heavens Child.
550 points, ended October 28, 2008, 20 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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There seems to be alot of sadness mixed in with confusion. I really like the last two lines of verse 3 because to me that's what poetry is all about, writing about what's inside. Best wishes and thank you for entering.
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tried everything and yet still cant make you see what lies within me.for a poet says it best when written with a little rhythm very well done my friend...
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Thank you ,best wishes Carl.
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