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To be you...




I adore your stupidity
for thoughts occur inside;

weaknesses are galore -

breathe.




Author notes

12 words I would say to some who has irritated me; after I have overlooked the situation.

Hope you like!

P.S I will be out of town for three days, sorry if you don't get a response from me I won't be near a computer.

What to do in an insane world?

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  • Mickie27
    October 27, 2008

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    Great poem and really easy to read. it is a very good poem. keep up the good work It was brilliant I loved it and I have been inspired to write one my self Fantastic! It's cool how you used so few words to describe so much. I liked it thanks.

  • depressedangelchick
    October 25, 2008

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    wow that was short and i will remember these words when i get to school since i think them about my friends constantly.