Caught in a storm of enemy troops,
buzzing and stinging,
hurling themselves tirelessly;
active thoughts swarm inside,
~
savage attacks consume soft flesh;
black on black furiously clambering,
as onslaughts of angry bees take possession,
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building a colony,
~
a black veil molds itself
to her wax-like carcass,
as she becomes Queen.
Author notes
50 words
Picture Prompt
gstudio.us/.../works/screens/Falling%20Into2.jpg
A contest entry
- - Beautiful Minds, Dark Addictions XII - by Arkbear.
400 points, ended October 28, 2008, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Oh my!
The visons are incredible!
99 out of 100!
Good luck & God bless you!
Bear ~
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Very original take of the prompt, you become better in your usage in words. You have already a clear look at the line-breaks, well done. Fine usage of imagery
A suggestion: try your poems to connect to a bigger whole.
Good luck in the contest
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