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"Color

C          D   
  A      E         
    RV
I
  N
    T
      O

THIS

D  R  E  A  M

OF

COLOR

THAT WAS MORE

THAN THIS SKY MADE IT

A contest entry

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  • feetus
    October 24, 2008

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    Interesting....
    I'm not a fan of the form, but that is
    still a very good line that means many things.
    Thanks for entering & g'luck