She dwelled alone,
Between the empty walls,
Lonely to the bone,
Ignored hollow calls.
Aspired to be more,
But the chance hasn't come,
Papers on the floor,
Determined to beat to her own drum.
The stars shine,
Unevenly in the sky,
You'll see the sign,
They'll hear your cry.
There's no need to fear,
He'll whisk you away,
Your breakthrough is near,
Just wait for the day.
Answers heard on-high,
His eyes speak clearly,
Her attempts weren't nigh,
Take his hand, sincerely;
Yours.
He's the key to her survival,
Never let him go,
Because upon his arrival,
Her talent lit, aglow.
The stars shine,
Unevenly in the sky,
You'll see the sign,
They'll hear your cry.
There's no need to fear,
He'll whisk you away,
Your breakthrough is near,
Just wait for the day.
Her life expanded,
Reaching out to the world,
With the chance he handed,
Her life unfurled.
So don't look back,
You're safe here now,
There's no more black,
Just take a bow.
The stars shine,
Unevenly in the sky,
You'll see the sign,
They'll hear your cry.
There's no need to fear,
He'll whisk you away,
Your breakthrough is near,
Today is the day.
Author notes
Written in more of a lyric then a poem, hope it won't be a bother ?
My first contest entry, :]
Hope whomever reads it enjoys it. . .
Topic:
"After the storm,
There's gonna be sunshine,
So stand in the rain and live it out,
Because when it's all done,
You're gonna shine like the sun."
A contest entry
- && even when the rain falls, you still have to stand. by my.stars.dont.shine.
1100 points, ended November 6, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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reads like lyrics to me, i like it though. it would make a really good song
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Seems it does for most people !
Thank you very much.
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It pretty dang good. =) It goes along with the prompt so well too. Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck.
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Thank you VERY much.
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You are welcome. =)
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