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I cant seem to find the truth,
That you hide so carelessly behind your lies.
and I don't seem to believe,
What I don't see with my own eyes.

You think I am blind,
To the sweet words you tell me.
But honestly you are the one,
That does not want to see.


This is not finished i just thought this up and wrote it down soes I wouldnt forget it.

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  • poetrandy
    November 13, 2008

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    Awesome Poem!

    Filled with emotion! Very good imagery in this poem! I really feel what you are describing here! A very good write -- keep it up! Good work!