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A Moment with the Sky

Stand quietly,
so that when your breath
meets the warm freeze
and scrubs the stars to orange and green,
you may hear the tepid POP of solitude echo in your ear,
and blanket your insides-
which stand so precariously
still.

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  • feetus
    October 24, 2008

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    Interesting take on the prompt!
    "tepid POP of solitude echo in your ear"
    What a clever line
    Thanks for entering & g'luck