Here is your arm back
Pathetic Danish peasant
Now bleed in my mouth.
Mother naps alot.
Some feel that she has earned it
Yet I only dream.
Send your best hero
With a box of toothpicks soon
Before it's too late.
I kill for Mother
Until the day she loves me
As much as her sleep.
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What can I say? I have six fingers a piece.
Written January 28th, 2004
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good luck in the contest
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Toothpicks. Cool.
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i was going to say something, about the last stanza, but i dont want to get yelled at. so i wont.
People always think Beowulf is so hard to understand, but really, you can tell the whole story in about 30 seconds.
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great haiku nice series you got there
spank you later
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Hmm. Out of my realm. Didn't read it but my sister in law lives in Denmark. But ya know what? It makes me happy to see you two so happy.
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You still crack me, you're a friend, and when my bus arrives we'll wrestle and drink and grass stain. we'll make the girls sing, we'll bachus out.
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Excellent.
Yah. Okay. I miss Beowoulf because he's my favorite wrestler, but Grendal is okay if Stone Cold Jackson isn't available.
Yah. That's all I can wring from this because its too flipping brilliant and literary. You've done a bang-up job AND in haiku as well, so I'm just gonna fold my tent and steal on out of this dark dank cavern and go drink some mead and make merry with the maids.
Sheesh. Completely and utterly excellent.
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