I feel the pain
of wearing your skin
I’ll share my love
In a list
A contest entry
- Are You Up For A Nice Loving Quickie? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended November 15, 2008, 23 entries
Silver trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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great depth captured in three lines. very nice.
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Empathetic and full of feeling.
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12 words
that have plenty of meaning...even if you can't do a Haiku with twelve words. guess she didnt see what it was for! Good luck in the contest! The Shaker
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Thank you for the comment. Once I saw the prompt, the words erupted from my muse like a volcano Heheh
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I like the style of this poem. It appears that you tried to form a haiku though. The style for those is 5 - 7 - 5 not 4 - 5 - 4. You could have made the poem a little longer.
Overall, it is a very nice piece and I plan to read more of your work.
Keep writing,
McCaylee -
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This was written for a contest prompt It was never intended to be a Haiku As for the rest of your comment Thank you very much
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wow this is deep the words you chosen was muderous i like this very bold and tough good luck in the contest
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Very nice poem. Short but sweet lol
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