Porcelain heart
pale and beautiful
beautiful yet delicate
seemingly fortified by all the walls around it
yet all these walls are as strong as paper
that porcelian heart
so hard to reach but still atainable
lying just outside my grasp at the moment
when and if i reach that porcelian heart
i will not drop it i swear
i will tuck it in a safe place so very close to mine
a warm loving place
yes...
such a place does exist within me
known to few
doubted by most, oh well
your there now
beside my porcelian heart
honest opinion please
Comments
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Sweet and fragile and pretty in a quaint way. Very lovely. Enjoyable to read.


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such a strong feeling comes through this
even if it is about a heart delicate , and fragile
beautiful expresses some caution
insecurities
very good


