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porcelain heart

Porcelain heart

pale and beautiful

beautiful yet delicate

seemingly fortified by all the walls around it

yet all these walls are as strong as paper

that porcelian heart

so hard to reach but still atainable

lying just outside my grasp at the moment

when and if i reach that porcelian heart

i will not drop it i swear

i will tuck it in a safe place so very close to mine

a warm loving place

yes...

such a place does exist within me

known to few

doubted by most, oh well

your there now

beside my porcelian heart

honest opinion please

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  • broken-colours
    November 12, 2008
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    Sweet and fragile and pretty in a quaint way. Very lovely. Enjoyable to read.

  • Anyajoellienne
    October 23, 2008

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    such a strong feeling comes through this
    even if it is about a heart delicate , and fragile
    beautiful expresses some caution
    insecurities
    very good