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Charades

Sell me pretty lies love,
tell me pretty lies.
I want to hear "I love you",
I don't need to see it in your eyes.

Let me hear those words dear,
and I'll pretend they're true,
you don't need to think of me,
you know that I won't think of you.

We both know it's not about us hon,
we both know that we're not here,
I don't care where your mind goes,
I just need a body near.

Touch me how you want her babe,
just don't call me by her name,
we'll both be someone else tonight,
and we'll leave the way we came.

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  • Harlequin Dance
    December 18, 2008

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    Both sides of the relationship are deceiving themselves and pretending they want to be with each other, when in reality, they would rather be with someone else. It has a jaded and slightly desperate tone to it. Wonderful.


  • unicorn375
    October 23, 2008

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    I love it! I wouldnt change anything about it. I like how its right to the point, very matter-of-fact. In a way it makes it kind of beautiful in a sort of strange way.