You spit on me,
and you mock me!
But I love you,
and pray for you!
Author notes
lol, 12 words was a hard task, my first version was like 3 times that. Its a cool contest. I look up to people like Peter, Paul, David, and Stephen, and of course the best of all Jesus, who lives by this.
A contest entry
- Are You Up For A Nice Loving Quickie? by theredcatjazzoflove.
700 points, ended November 15, 2008, 23 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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very nice
They know not what they do! When you hurt others you really hurt yourself. Bless you for your kind heart and good luch in the contest! The Shaker
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Great job! 12 words is tricky to accomplish. But you did it brilliantly! Best of wishes in the contest ^^
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i like this i think you dud a very great excellent job with this piece here hon i know it was a challenge for me in a recent contet i entered but you did well
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