Rising from the lunar tides
grasping life in beautiful morning hues
climbing to peak the sky flaming high
ingesting illumination arcing soul reflections
centered in rays of introspection
exaltation on a sovereign plane
journey on a run away train
pitch eclipsed halcyon days
black tomb obliteration in grey
abyss to dark emotions turmoil
ebony dusk of tomorrow
empath of the color sorrow
in twilight the scales shift
caught between rivalries drift
black sun Sunoir internal duel
equidistant between the two
ascension and descent
walking the thin line
catching the spinning coin
as it plummets and splinters my mind
Author notes
Sunoir
A contest entry
- People Prompts by sheltered.
600 points, ended October 29, 2008, 11 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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amazing poem, love the word choice and imagery. just wow. wonderful job.
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I had no idea your user-name had so much meaning
so this was quite eye-opening
my fave. part was the spinning coin at the end
such clear imagery there
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that is sooooooo you G.
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