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Imagine

                         

Can you hear the sounds of tomorrow through an open door?
Can you see the light at the end that we're all waiting for?
Can you touch a star in the sky before it quickly fades away?
Can you dance with soothing ocean mist as it lifts its spray?

Can you taste the lucious fruit of love that is yet ungrown?
Can you embrace all the dreams that are actually yours to own?
Can you feel the mighty sands of time shifting just for you?
Can you understand your inner child and know just what to do?

Can you reach within and heal your pain and set your spirit free?
Can you search your soul enough to know it's you who holds the key?
Can you survive the dark storms of life without losing your way?
Can you walk the road less travled while still remaining happy?

Can you imagine the miracle of life is the one and only you?
Can you imagine believing all this isn't really very hard to do?

 

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Contest image, Inspiration, courtesy of 'The Inspiration Hour': http://theexplosion.ning.com/group/inspirationhour

 

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  • Amunet Wolfbane Moderators member
    December 6, 2008

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    I really like where you've taken this piece. I will be honest and say I am not overly fond of the repetition. I think it would have been stronger if it was not used in each line but I do get your sentiments.

  • goalsv
    October 30, 2008

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    Very well written, light hearted yet full of very good questions that we should all be asking ourselves instead of being so self obsorbed.


  • Jesann gold member
    October 25, 2008

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    Awesome!!!
    Love the way you have gone through all the senses.
    Wonderful imagery, I loved it!!!
    Great ending in the last two lines.

  • Hoping2bwholeagain
    October 25, 2008
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    Hey, this is beautiful!!! I loooooved the last line...


    • Cynthia Gaines gold member
      October 25, 2008
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      Thank you for dropping in!!!

      I'm glad you enjoed my poem on Inspiration, and I appreciate the kudos!!! Have a great day, and take care. Peace, Cyn

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