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The Silence

Been so long since I heard your voice,
Nothing I can do, I have no choice
Trying to hard to keep up the trend
Can't keep doing this, where does it end?
The life that I'm leading, can't keep pretending
I'm begging and pleading, the silence is
Deafening, and never ending...
(Chorus)
The silence is saying,
Can't keep up this game,
That I'm playing
The silence is screaming,
Oh, You are only dreaming
The silence is breaking,
Can't lead this life,
That I'm faking
(End Chorus)
I can still feel your breath on my ears..
The memories are breaking, turning into tears
Lost in the middle of something I can't see
Stuck on the ledge of something I can't be
What's the use in denying what I feel?
There's something here, that is still so very real
(Chorus)
The Silence is saying,
Can't keep up this game,
That I'm playing
The silence is screaming,
You are only dreaming
The silence is breaking,
Can't lead this life,
That I'm faking
(End Chorus)
The silence is breaking,
I can't keep faking
The silence is breaking,
I can't keep faking...
Faking this, what I feel
Cause as much as I try
These feelings are real...
The silence..
...Is breaking..

Author notes

Just.. Flowed out.

"Silence"

Written January 28th, 2004

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  • poeticcaresses
    February 18

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    Very pretty. I wonder if you had music in mind when you wrote this? Thank you for your entry and good luck!


  • Lislaine
    October 15, 2008
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    Waww!!! one of my favorites till now!!! very good!