Baby, all i wont to do is be your angel,
let me love you,
let me protect you,
please, baby please!
If I could be your angel,
Protect you from the pain,
I'll keep you safe from danger,
You'll never hurt again!
Will you take a chance with me?
let me protect you,
let me be your angel,
let me be the one that saves you,
please baby please!
If i was your angel,
you would hurt no more,
id wash away your tears,
dry up your blood,
no more hurting yourself now dear,
ill be your angel,
ill be your sun!
ill be your bright new day,
Your gorgous dream,
your happy smile,
theres no more tears,
no more blood,
no more cuts,
no more pain,
please, baby please!
let me be your angel...
Author notes
option two 
A.N.G.E.L. by Natasha Bedingfield
A contest entry
- #23 OPTIONS CONTEST (: by Walk-Free.
600 points, ended October 26, 2008, 11 entries
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Comments
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aww.. this was really sweet.
but i felt you merely took the lyrics of the song and added a few lines of your own here and there.
it wasn't bad for me though because i enjoyed the simplicity of this poem and how you sounded a little desperate with your "please, baby please"
thanks and best of luck
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