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Pity

I cried because
you can't see yourself
so I can't help you.

Author notes

This is about the same person as "The Projectionist" in the mean contest. It is equally heartfelt.

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  • Shakes-spear
    November 12, 2008
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    very profound

    i like your thought on this and hope that they find their reflection! the Shaker


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    wow this is good reaon being if you cant se the reflection of you in a mirror how on earth one is to help you