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take what you want from me.

And i remember.
this time last year

when it was just me and you.
[footie pajamas and midnight cigarettes]
winter never felt so
sweet


and you knew i was leaving.
sixty days was all we had left
but we were living like we had
.f.o.r.e.v.e.r.

and i remember those nights we spent.
breathing each other in.
when really i knew
you were just
breaking me apart.

that you were too hard to just
[forget]
that we'd really taken the
hard road
and we got four miles too far.

oh sugar roo
you made me a blur.
wishing that i could go back
and re-live every second

we were so in love.
maybe with just the moment...

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winter blows.

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Comments

  • kshleo53
    January 16
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    nice

    you always have been the best poet i know amber

  • shortyjo
    October 24, 2008
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    Oooh I love the ending! Kinda wistful. Love it


  • Miss Faith
    October 23, 2008

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    oh fuck.


    you pretty much just wrote how I've been feeling.
    do we have the same life or what?!

    beautiful, darling.

    "and i remember those nights we spent.
    breathing each other in.
    when really i knew
    you were just
    breaking me apart."