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Willy Watkins Walked West

Willy Watkins was 

walking wearily 

west to 

wend his way 

in the rain

without getting wet. 

He carried

a handy

dandy

hand held 

MP3 player

that he 

couldn’t get wet.

While walking

Willy

wanted to 

wet his whistle,

so to the best bar

on his beat

he went.

He had a 

hardy drink

hardly enough 

to warm him up, 

Willy walked 

westward 

once more.

Author notes

This is just another of my silly alliteration-filled e. e. cummings-like poems, for your enjoyment in reading aloud!

Are there really ghosts?

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  • patrick20traveler
    November 6, 2008

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    Alliteration and ee cummings are not my cup of tea, but I sense talent in the word play and the musical quality of this work. Surely best read aloud.


  • mrocun
    October 31, 2008
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    This is really fun to read.
    Good work.

    Samuel