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Autumn





the last
of the Autumn leaves
                        took wind

and began
their final journey



I am no longer
protected

and can see
Winter coming.







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  • Desire gold member
    November 21, 2008
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    Wowzers~

    Brevity at its finest and Love how You presented this John
    I did not want it to end~
    Strong images neatly packaged
    Bravo!!


    Thank You for sharing Your Talent and Voice~
    Many blessings to You in all You do Sweet One
    Best wishes too
    with much love & light~ Desire~*~


  • Gatlianne
    November 12, 2008
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    ahhhhh

    Your work always fills me with such a wonderment of serenity


  • Candy6
    October 23, 2008
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    Very good write. Willow tree are sad.


  • donnz
    October 23, 2008
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    excellent

    ...from technicolor to black & white.
    Ahh re-runs.


  • Leonura
    October 23, 2008

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    aye, what a dreary day it will be too, when Winter takes her first breath. Softly written, yet beautifully displayed.

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