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No The Frizzies

It started with the groan
and I stumbled over my purse
filled with pocket change
I cry

today I must spend
like everyday at the mall
my face is perfect
ruby red and blue eye shadow

My friends will be here by nine
time to straighten my hair
oh no it won't fall in place
its not cooperating

No no it can't be a bad hair day
and I only have an hour
stop clock woe it is wild
static frizz

Maybe hairspray
maybe if I wet it
maybe if I just cry
in deep depression I call it off.


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3. Write a poem as a famous person having a bad hair day

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  • tawk gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Great poem and I can so relate if I don't wet my hair it's all over the place lol. I also have many hats. Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest hugs Theresa


  • daviscth silver member
    October 26, 2008

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    LOL!! I know exactly how this person must feel!! Thank goodness for hats! Thanks so much for posting in my contest, this was fun to read.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 23, 2008

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    Excellent Imagery within this well-written piece.
    Love the last Line---It sums it all up!!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!