The lovelight shines out of her beautiful eyes,
her sweet dimpled smile makes my temperature rise.
When she whispered up close sweetest things in my ear,
as we danced cheek to cheek,shed a happiness tear.
A long goodnight kiss, both reluctant to part,
sent love’s butterflies fluttering, around in my heart.
Author notes
Option The Greatest kiss...JUDMC .."Fight Off Your Demons"
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Very cute penning, i enjoyed it. Ty and gl in the contests!
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That is absolutely adorable!! I love this, it has beautiful rhyme and it flows like water...
"A long goodnight kiss, both reluctant to part,
sent love’s butterflies fluttering, around in my heart."
Good luck and thanks for entering my contest.
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Beautiful imagery and wonderfuly written.Good luck in the contest.
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this is good, thanks for entering it.
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Aw! This is so cute!!! ^_^
Good luck in the contest(s)! -thumbs up-
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i can see the images well, the sensuous kiss could lead into more with the fluttering of the heart. emotionally well displayed. thanks for entering and good luck.
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perfect rhyming, balance and flow....I can feel the emotions dancing like a beautiful waltz.....thank you for entering my contest.....novy
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This is really good. I love that it's a happy poem. Reminds me of the earlier stages of a relationship... "butterflies". I can feel the excitement and lust here. It's really good.
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Amazing!
I love this! Its so sweet! I can feel the love between you two. Its like I share the same butterflies of love that you experience. The fluttering in the stomach is as sweet as butterfly kisses on the cheek. Wonderful job and good luck! -
wonderful work good luck in the contest.
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So beautiful and this would be one lucky lady for a man like you to feel that way. Blessings.
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Love does have its moments...doesn't it? thanks for your entry and good luck.
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This is a very good poem. But my contest is supposed to be for a boy FROM a girl. Not about a girl. sorry.
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Aww... I've been through this before, you feel so good you never wanna leave them... but then you remember that if you didnt go home, your parents would kill you and then you couldnt be with them ever again. Lol
Wonderful write, it touch my heart and brought back good memories. thank you.
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good luck
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i like this alot. it's warm and comforting.
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This has a warm loving quality that I really enjoyed, a real pleasure to read this sweet poem.
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this is a sweet poem. very romantic and touching! love your rhyme scheme. this is just SO CUTE! i can't get over it! haha.
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Aww! Such a sweet write. This is truly magical, the tender passion in this makes me want to cry yet sing for joy at the same time. And oh! Such a beautiful ending. This really is a poem to be cherished. Well done; thanks for entering the contest with this divine write
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Many Thanks for your kind comments on"The Wolf Man" so glad you liked it Best Wishes,George ... -
Sweet Blue Eyes
Many Thanks for your kind comments on "The Goodnight Kiss" I'm
so glad you enjoyed reading it. Best Wishes and Kindest Regards George ++++
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Very sweet verse. Lyrical,
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Beautiful poem. Good luck in the contest
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That's nifty little write. Always a good topic to pen and nicely rhymed. Though I haven't had a sweet goodnight kiss for awhile I remember them well. Happy trails neighbor.
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Very sweet. It was written well.
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This made me cry. And, no, it's not cause I'm a big baby or anything. It just reminded me of the last night I spent with my boyfriend. We slow danced for a little while and then when he kissed me good-bye neither of us were ready or willing to leave.
Thanks for entering. Good luck.
Sarah
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very cute
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beautifull happy colors i see great work truly lovely -bows-
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