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Santa's Snow

Its a fine chilled day
snow flakes dancing my nose
moon rays shimmering the cold
as I package Santa's sleigh

The reindeer harnessed and snug
while elves finish children's toys
away away went the willy winter
over valleys and mountains it sores

Cookies baked, fruit cake eaten
turkey warm in oven for Santa's return
time to rest the night jolly session
for tomorrow starts a new

Toys to be made
stockens to be darned
things to be baked
and Santa needs me,Ms. Santa.

Author notes

1. A day in the life of Ms. Claus. Making all those cookies, putting up with moody elves and frisky reindeer.

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  • tawk gold member
    October 30, 2008

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    Yes Mrs. Claus needs some help too. What a wonderful journey you have taken me on. Good luck in the contest hugs Theresa


  • daviscth silver member
    October 24, 2008

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    This is such a wonderful homey take on the prompt. Santa does indeed need his missus!!! I adore the imagery and warmth in this poem. Thanks so much for posting.


  • BuriedTreasures silver member
    October 23, 2008
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    An enjoyable read--Very cute & creative!
    Well Done & Best of Luck in the Contest!


  • Rhythm Child
    October 23, 2008
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    it makes christmas seem lovely even to someone who dreads it ! very enjoyable poem