Magenta across the masochist violet
Heavens bleed, stars die
Lights in the sky passively warn
Unbiased
To affinity, to infinity
Indifference everlasting
All preconceived destiny
Are but insignificant blots
On the edge of twinkling twilight
Where supernovas of dreams and illusion
Distort and blur the elusive horizon
As the pulsing meteors of our hearts
Decimate our orbiting eyes
Driving the craters in our chests
To burn and metastasize
Nervously eyeing the setting sun
Evolution to inevitability
For the greater good, for nirvana
Lights in the sky glow bright
Before fading
Into the space between spaces
Author notes
enjoy.
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt by feetus.
450 points, ended October 24, 2008, 15 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
I like the dark angle. Your choice of words
works very well for the write. The first two lines
& the last three, & everything in between. Well done.
Thanks for entering & g'luck
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Wow! This is awesome bro! Certainly seen it in a very dark and different light to the usual
I love the way you see things, wonderful take on the picture Love the ending, space between spaces, excellent imagery. Should do very well in the contest, superbly penned, good luck 
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