Please don't leave
I'm just realizing how much you mean to me
You've been this way for 5 school years now
I'm just realizing that without you
Our family would NEVER have been as close as it is
You've been getting worse
Or at least I hear you haven't been doing too well lately
I don't want this to happen
You mean SOO much to me
I never could have made it all these years
Without knowing that once I got home
You'd be there waiting for your hugg and kiss
I couldn’t let go and fall into my own pit of death
As I sometimes wished to do
Because then you'd be upset
something that’s not good for you
It could have ended you as well
I couldn’t let that happen
Grandma has changed her life
To be souly wrapped around you
To lose you and me...
It would have been too much for her
We couldn’t have done that to her
Now could we?
Please Papa I need you
Without you I can’t promise to take care of Grandma
Please Don't Leave us...
Not Yet...
Even though you're not my father
On my wedding day
Whenever that is
You have to roll down the aisle in your wheelchair
With me and my father
If we lose you now
That can't happen
I need you
We ALL need you
Don't leave us yet....
A contest entry
- If you were to die by Starz of Heaven.
625 points, ended October 25, 2008, 16 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Make My Heart Cry by AbsoluteBrightness.
1400 points, ended November 7, 2008, 45 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I've been meaning to get this out for years...i juss couldnt get started
Comments
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that is wonderful...i love it and you mean so much to me and i don't want to lose you ither<3
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This is a very touching poem there are a few typos that you might want to look at and correct but other then that it is written well thank you for your entry be well
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amazingly emotional, great poem, you should be proud
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