I never looked away from you,
I wanted it to last,
I saw you in that crowded bar,
I loved you from from the start.
I argued with you just the once,
I said a few choice words,
I wished I had not hurt you then,
I hunger for your love.
Author notes
10 lines pic prompt
A contest entry
- PIF Quickie!! Interested ? by Angels hero.
950 points, ended October 24, 2008, 9 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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So sad.. we all have regrets such as these in life. Congrats on the Gold hun!
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Aw such a wonderful poem
Tells a story
Loved the flow and the opening of each line with 'I'
Well deserved gold
Best wishes Julie
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Love hurts
It is hard to take back things you really didn't want to say.
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Hey thanx
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Beautifully expressed and very well written. Good luck with the contest.
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Hey thanx so much for de gold
I am over de moon
cheers abe
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