Save your wishes for the stars,
Overhanging the sky beneath which you rest,
Lost in a world of wartorn scars,
Destined to put your survival skills to the test.
In this time, hugs, and affection are due.
Even a birthday comes for the best.
Returns of the day are blessed to you.
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Written for a contest for PrinceOfFires' birthday.
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such a lovely bittersweet message to a twenty year old serving his birthday in the sandwitchery of iraq, i truly enjoyed this acrostic. ~~Artis
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this is a beautiful dedication
great write
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Beautiful
So true and blessings for all our service men and women and know we love you all so very much
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My constructive advice to you is to leave the write as it. He is the best to me. He's my personal hero. I'm glad you wrote this acrostic for him.
Thanks so much for entering and good luck in the contest.
Rose
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happy birthday to him .good thoughts
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very sweet
nice smooth flowing and rhyming acrostic.
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Great! I find it hard to make acrostics rhyme, and not make them choppy, but this is wonderful! "Save your wishes for the stars" is a great way to start and a beautiful description. Good job, sis, and best luck in the contest!
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Oh sis this is such a sweet and beautiful write. I can tell that it came from your heart!!! You did a lovely job!!! This is a magnificent piece!!! I love it!!!
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