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Amber Alert

Take your white lightning
And Nature's first green
Let the restless rust
In my eyes not be seen

I cannot be fooled
By the color of deception
Even peachy keen
Is no exception

I'm running with the wind
And dancing with the dawn
To the ages of Earth
Till my time is gone

And I will run away
Unscathed and unhurt
Don't bother to send out
The Amber Alert

A contest entry

Colorful (but in a good way)...

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  • feetus
    October 24, 2008

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    A very interesting take on the prompt!
    The third stanza is my favorite
    Thanks for entering & g'luck


  • JustFallingApart
    October 23, 2008
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    wow, nice write