I'm sure we will go together like Poprocks and coke,
I'll take you to see the stars,
maybe even give you a look at Mars
Look up to the Starburst skies,
And see the fun shining in our eyes,
I'll Boost you high with all my love,
Before I beging to go off Topic, let me tell you how much this means to me,
I'll love you like you were always there,
be-Twix-t my heart and I will show you the way with my gentle Wispa
So my new little sister, come with me and Revel in my joy with me, and share my candy dreams,
Author notes
Okay so you may not of heard of some of these as I am in the UK and we have different candy but aI hope you like, the candies were,
Poprocks, Mars, Starburst,Boost, Topic, Twix, Wispa, and Revel(s) I cleverly made the words twix and wispa into the poem 
I'm proud of this he he
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A contest entry
- CandyCandyCandyCandy! by sailor ptolema.
3000 points, ended October 25, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wonderful
Very creative and so well done. A terrific rewrite. Best of luck in the contest.
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i did like this, i simply forgot to comment. i'm sorry
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