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Unearthed

Missing image

 

 

Crafted with care,
a stone,

fashioned to reveal
the hidden facets,
brilliant dimensions,
zig-zagged with accuracy,
across the plained surface.
Only the eye that is gifted,
ever searching,

discovers the gems hidden heart.
As love comes to the surface of any relationship,
so it has to be crafted with utmost care,
fashioned, turned to relinquish its natural flair,
often hidden from  curious eyes.
Held softly between two palms,
beats the heart of exquisite beauty.

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  • islekine gold member
    November 5, 2008

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    Aloha and mahalo for your

    "sparkling" entry...I truly enjoyed this...
    and I have enjoyed our friendship here...
    be well and blessed...I will pop in, every now and then...
    Take care...
    Write on!


  • NeonRose
    October 28, 2008

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    Love your concept! 'Gems hidden heart' ..lovely! Best to you in the contest!


    • cutiepie gold member
      October 29, 2008
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      Thank you for your kindness Glad you enjoyed it


  • aboomer silver member
    October 23, 2008
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    Beautiful wording and images in this!
    I much enjoyed it.
    best wishes in the contest

  • Starz of Heaven gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    I think that you did a great job I like your take on the picture thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest be well

  • Bob Fox
    October 23, 2008

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    My

    I love the anaolgy between the diamond and the heart. I gentle, soft write with much beauty my talented poet friend.

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