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Its hard

Living a life
oh so torn up
You have had
many trying times
many of us
have had trying times
but through it all
we will come out on top

Top the heartbreaks
with memories of joy
Flowing through your mind
As fast as an angel flies
When you need them
they come rushing back at you
filling your heart with joy and happiness

Happiness is key
to the trials of life
when you are down
happiness will set you free
Just like an angel
soaring high

Author notes

i would love to either be your AP son or any relative you want me to be.
it would be my pleasure to talk and cheer you up with my funny gimmicks that do.

A contest entry

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  • Gothic Beauty
    March 13
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    Geez, you're a better poet than I am! I'm a little envious


  • Angels Whispers gold member
    October 29, 2008

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    A Son You Shall Be!

    sss to you sweet one.
    I hope this message greets you with a happy heart.

    Hon, your write was beautiful and so very uplifting, as I read your words I felt the flutter of tiny wings that breezed past me.

    This my friend were the angels bringing to me your words of love.
    They touched my soul so very deeply.
    These words here.... Top the heartbreaks
    with memories of joy.... how beautiful !

    Your write has so much wisdom woven within.
    The last stanza ....Happiness is key
    to the trials of life
    when you are down
    happiness will set you free
    Just like an angel
    soaring high.....

    This touched my soul ever so deeply.You are like a breath of fresh air lifting ones soul so they are able to fly once again in the heavenly skies.

    If I could reach through this monitor,I would tenderly hug you and give back to you, what you have given to me, and that is love and caring of another human being.

    Sweet heart I have so much love to give, and would dearly love to share this with you.

    So with arms opened wide, it would make my heart so very happy for you to join my family.
    I'm glad to have you in my family as my 'Son'.

    So Welcome Son!
    We can share things, inspire each other and if you need to vent ... well, I'm always all ears and will gladly listen.


    With deep appreciation I thank you for wanting to become a member of my family, and also for noticing my contest and taking the time to enter it.

    I send to you much love and happiness and look forward to getting to know you more deeply!

    Take care son and as soon as time allows I will begin reading your works.
    Know that you are appreciated and cared for.
    Much love and happiness to you son,

    Your loving mom.
    (aka Anne)



  • Nephlim
    October 26, 2008

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    "Top the heartbreaks with memories of joy." That's a quotable line! =D I love it. The theme throughout the poem was constant, happiness, and the imagery of angels flying really set that theme off. Beautiful! ^-^
    GREAT job
    diggin it majorly


  • spangler
    October 25, 2008
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    hey it is good as always


  • arezes mom
    October 23, 2008
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    nicely written i likey alot.... i hope u get to join the ap family.

    lissa

  • Bob Fox
    October 23, 2008

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    Poet

    Words of wisdom spoken here from a young but attentive heart. And yes happiness is the key. Happy writing poet.

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