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Intoxicated

You imprison me with your touch.
Lost in you, with nowhere to go.
Your lips are upon and I can feel your thrust.
My emotions are flying as you’re being pleasured.
Without my feelings in head,
You soil me;
You intoxicate me.
Convinced this is my fault
Tears fall seemingly down my cheeks
And upon my bare chest.
I kick and I scream for you to let me go.
What’s the use, im already damned?
Your sweat is dripping on me,
And im feeling nauseated.
Poor little Kaitlyn. It’d be a shame to do something right for once wouldn’t it?
SHUT UP BITCH,
STOP YOUR FUCKING CRYING; IM NOT PUTTING UP WITH IT.
Your hand imprinted on my right cheek
I wipe away the tears and give in to my maters call.
You push me so hard I feel insane.
How do you do it?
Tears are falling like rain;
And you’re getting angry.
IT’S HARD TO ENJOY YOUR INNOCENCE WHEN I HAVE TO STOP AND DISAPLIN YOU.
WHEN WILL YOU LEARN?
IM NEVER GOING TO STOP.
Under the covers, alone and scared.
More torture then pleasure.
I don’t even know who you are in this state.
Yes sir, I reply to your orders.
Switching positions I consume your penis.
In and out of my mouth.
So wrong, but to you so right.
You’re daddy’s little show girl;
I can make you a star.
With strict orders engraved in my brain never to stop,
My wearied soul continues to lustfully pleasure you.
These feelings are tearing me apart.
You’re moaning and you’re groaning.
Daddy, I whisper softly;
When can I be done?
Another blow to my head and another loud scream.
WHEN I FUCKING SAY YOU’RE DONE.
You were once my hero daddy,
But now you’re a villain.

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  • dx d by me
    October 24, 2008

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    Bravo for writing in such a straightforward manner. I invstigate situations like this every day, and the psychological devastation is written so well in this piece. The title is fascinating, in your application it seems to lean toward the poisonous result of the altered awareness, powerful choice. Keep writing strong, and welcome to AP, Geo


  • Alyzeh
    October 24, 2008
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    Welcome to All Poetry. Oh God, that was the most disturbing piece I've read in a very long time. The clever choice of words, strong thoughts, emotions and imagery had me going on.. You are indeed very brave to have shared this with the rest of the world. Bless you.

    Please don't stop writing..this is one strong write.
    Love!


  • queen Moderators member
    October 23, 2008

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    welcome to all poetry

    Hi Kaitie-Jai

    This is an amazing poem, no one has the right to treat you this way. You deserve love and respect Please keep writing it is a great way to get these emotions out
    Barbara
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  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Oh my God, this gave me chills. You are so brave to share this. It's a beautiful piece, in a heartwrenching way. Well done, and thankyou for entering.

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~