Brotherly Love,
oh what a great feeling
the closeness
the charisma
its just wonderfully attractive
its winning to be with us
being close is all so nice
but being nice is being so near
come near and hear
the sounds of the trumpets
the roars of the crowd
walk out proud with your brother
just to show him that you care
stand next to him
all jubilant and strong
look at him
he is so proud
all this fan fare
its all for you
they came just to celebrate
the care that you give
just remember
im your brother
brotherly love
its special indeed
A contest entry
- Shhhhhhhh.......... it's a surprise!!!!!! by Stingersinger53.
525 points, ended October 31, 2008, 6 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
wat u think bout this
Comments
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I loved this!! It was sweet!! Thanks for entering!!
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This is sweet! Thanks for entering and writing and good luck!
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Wow...this is a really good poem. I like the way that you talk about this brotherly love. Good job
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thanks i love being a brother to ppl. its my favorite thing to do. i m rlly supportive
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