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The Promise of Love

She’s not easy,
With a promise of love
She makes her self greasy
She smoothes the oil
Over her soft and ample skin
To glisten and shine in the
Flickering light of the cheap hotel room
Her clothes slowly slide to the floor
To be kicked aside,
He waits no more.

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Prompt 6: She's not easy, just keeps losing weight in motel rooms to make her clothes fall off.

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  • penman gold member
    October 24, 2008
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    Wonderful

    Very well done. Best of luck in the contest.