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She will burn

Inadequate,
she's desire less;
yet unpretentious.

Minuscule,
imperfections seem to flourish.
Start on another body.

Insignificant,
thin, thin, thin.
She's but blood and bones.

Unimportant,
There's a luster shining
through this faceless mass.

Inconsequential,
inevitable and unequivocal
She will burn.

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