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Aggression

Don’t be so stupid,
You always blame me.
I wish I could help you,
Make you try and see.

I punched you and kicked you,
And made you cry out.
I didn’t mean to hurt you,
What is this fight even about.

You annoyed me bad,
And I lost the plot.
Now when I think about it,
You deserve all that you got.

I don’t know what went wrong,
What you did to make me so mad.
But I hate you so much,
I just want to hurt you bad.

Your so into yourself,
And don’t care what others think.
But if you think I’m gonna get over it,
Then all your thoughts stink.

If you do it again,
I swear I’ll break your neck.
If you don’t believe what I have to say,
Then do it and we’ll double check.

We scream and we swear,
And I don’t know if you mean what you say.
But every word that comes from my mouth,
I could say it to you every day.

Author notes

not from my point of view, just putting my mind into a bully's point of view and this is what i came up with. renae

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  • hurtgurl
    March 23
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    This was a great piece of work.Loved it


  • Rend the Veil gold member
    October 23, 2008
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    Wow that

    was from a bully's point of view, great flow,

    blessings

    Rend


  • DramaQueen469 gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    Wow, always like poems that get into a perpetrator's mind and this is no exception, very well done and thankyou for entering!

    ~*~DramaQueen469~*~