To see the world
with innocence
All color would be as beautiful
as a rainbow after a spring shower
Brilliance and beauty
would fill the minds eye
Favorite colors to fit personality
not prejudice
Author notes
Through A Child's Eyes
A contest entry
- Prompt Contest 10 entries 30 to 40 words #19 by mysticstorm.
700 points, ended October 24, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Struggling to find my muse lately :(
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Something that moves within the readers mind. a beautiful write.
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Thank you
Thank you. It would be nice if we could keep our innocence forever
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Ahh a child knows no prejudice as you have so written here. bravo and great work. Thanks for sharing.
Warm thoughts
Frozentearz -
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Thank you
Wouldnt it be wonderful if we could keep the innocence we were born with
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How wonderfully true...the world would be such a brighter place if children could be left in innocence and not learn the ugliness of prejudice...well done...thank you for entering.
mystic -
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Thank you
It would be a wonderful place indeed!
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