Eyes of fire
pour over me like summer rain.
Reminding me of when we would run wild through it,
just as the sun sets
in all of its sanguine glory.
I've never felt more free.
Up in the barn loft you make my body bare.
With hard touches and soft kisses you take me,
each movement lower than a whisper,
we can't let them hear.
Our bodies dance like we're in a trance,
I've never felt more vulnerable.
My heart beats fast,
the sheets are wet from rain and sweat,
it feels so hot,
but you cool my desire.
My soul mate,
I've never felt more in love.
With every breath you take me higher,
clutching my skin,
like you could never let me go.
You make my passion flow like a ravenous river.
Back bent, heart of the wolves,
and I've never felt more for you than I do now...
In this moment.
A contest entry
- Love, Love, Love by Wolven Roses.
700 points, ended November 27, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Wow. Truly fantastic, I like the wolves. XD need I say passionate?
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This is so tender and beautiful.This is love!!!awesome job !! It flows so smoothly.I loved it!----------Jenn





