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Freedom

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Free to be the person
I’ve always desired to be
Nothing holding me back
From being free
Not even me

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  • spiritualangel
    November 6, 2008
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    Beautiful. Best of Luck.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      November 6, 2008
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      Thank you for taking the time to comment. God Bless, Jo-Ann

  • Trew
    October 23, 2008
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    very nice

    favorite line
    not even me

  • goalsv
    October 23, 2008

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    Nicely done, a short yet powerful poem about living to our full potential. You have it correct that even we should not stop ourselves from doing and being our best.


    • smonte19124 gold member
      October 23, 2008
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      Good Morning and thank you so very much for stopping by and leaving such kind words. God Bless, Jo-Ann

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