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Barrel Stove

 

 

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It was a big-ass stove
made from a 55 gallon drum
and when he loaded its belly
with pine slats and red oak logs
it would growl with pleasure
and lick the room
with its smokey hot breath

And I would strip each layer

of wool and cotton
smothering my skin
with the illusion of winter
until I lay bare naked
under the hot brazen sun
stroking my thighs
through the pane

of the window

I was so warm
in the sweat of that room
with its cotton mouthed dry
and bare naked wet

 

 

 

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  • just rob gold member
    October 23, 2008

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    I heated with wood for twenty five years, some of them with a barrel stove. Winter nudity was so... luxurious. Thanks for the lovely trip back.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 23, 2008
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  • righteousme
    October 23, 2008

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    its cotton mouthed dry
    and bare naked wet ...

    i think you might have made me wet ... DAMN woman, this piece is amazingly loving and warm and makes me wish for a log cabin with a fireplace and a weekend away with my wife ... your pieces never fail to amaze me and make me want to strive for more in my own writing ... thanks for sharing and GO FOR THE GOLD!!!


  • charcoal
    October 23, 2008
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    so not cliched wool sweater and old chair. love the images you created here.


  • BehindTheShadow
    October 23, 2008
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    dq u? This is gold, baby!

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