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The Necklace

Her eyes lost its luster
Always fixed on the passing ground
Holding on to him, the memories
With all the strength she can muster

Torturing her thoughts,
Shattering the heart he helped fix,
The tears always burning  her cheeks
How could someone break her like this?

A necklace she held dear,
The one she always wore,
Draws a tear,
A necklace on which love she swore

Keeping him tucked away,
Sideways glances to nothing,
Mute in her hidden suffering,
When she always had something to say

Torturing her thoughts,
Shattering the heart he helped fix,
The tears always burning  her cheeks
How could someone break her like this?

He says he wants her back,
"Just wanted to see if this girl liked me"
Why can't he see,
The heart she somewhat lacks

The arms stained ruby black,
Scars for the unworthy
Blood for the one who meant the most,
So to you Zach, heres a toast,

Torturing her thoughts,
Shattering the heart YOU helped fix,
The tears always burning  her cheeks
How could YOU break her like this?

Shes smiling anyway
A brave smile with nothing to say
Always trying to push through,
Amber this is how I see you,

Author notes

This is about my best friend Amber and her ex Zach. They went out for six months. Amber loved him. Zach broke up with her to see if this girl liked him and if yes, to take her to a party and make out with her. And now he wants her back. Calls her baby, and other nicknames. She won't let him go. She had a necklace that said I :heart: Zachary, I had her give it to me because she texted me saying I shouldn't have let him go. when she saw it she was so upset. Shes a half shell and he doesn't give a crap.

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  • AmberSuicide
    November 2, 2008

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    i love it...
    thanks casey.....
    it made me cry...
    it is true...
    zach doesn't give a shit about me
    and i still can't let him go....
    but thanks....
    i love you casey.
    your a true friend


  • PaigeePerfectionx
    October 23, 2008

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    oh this is so good =D

    yeah.. i know what she is going through.

    I was with this guy jack for just under a year.

    And he was my absolute evrything. He still is hes seeing other girls, i have another boy but somwhere deep down i know that monty [my new] is just a cover up for the emptiness jack left.

    I hope amber comes through okay. Some people do but i never did.

    I hope one day Zach see's just what hes done to her and then she wont have him back even when she see's that he understands.

    The most important thing is for he not to take him back untill shes sure he wont break her all over again. <3

    its very good my dear xxxx ly xxx