He grabbed her hand
(heart pounding)
He had been waiting his whole life for this moment
(tears starting to well up in his eyes)
The sound of water rushing over the rocks
(warmth flowing through out his body)
Her blue eyes melted him where he stood
(starts to feel like he is floating)
He drops to one knee
(so nervous she may decline)
He says the words
(he closes his eyes)
She starts to cry
(he feels electric)
She takes the ring
(he finally feels complete)
He takes her in his arms and holds her close
(she folds into him)
He tells her he loves her
She does the same
They kiss and become one
Author notes
I cant wait for this to happen to me. I dream about it every day and sometimes even when im sleeping I know 100% that she is the one and that I have to show her that. I will do this very soon I love my girlfriend more than anyone has ever loved another person. I will do anything to be with her. So this is to you christy my one true love.
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aww so sweet ans very romantic i love it keep it up and keep going i know how u feel i am in love and will never stop loving my gf till the day i die thank you for writting something like this to remind me of her love and my love for her thank you great job stay true stay sic and peace out
PS i will check out the rest of your poem and comment if you like
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