Four neat bullet holes, at least
I put in Donald Jefferson, deceased.
(He knew damn well he wasn’t s'posed to tell.)
Now all I have to do is sit and wait
here in this comfy cell;
I accept that as my rightful fate.
But steel bars can’t quench the joy
of bloody vengeance. Boy, oh boy!
It must really grate
on Donald’s soul
to see me whole
while that damn snitch
is burning up in hell.
A contest entry
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900 points, ended October 24, 2008, 10 entries
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i would like to thank you for this entry into the contest for my son and to wish you the best of luck in the judging process. viyanna rosemarie
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while that damn snitch
is burning up in hell.
I hate being snitched on. I like this poem, it's funny and mean. A good write, thanks for entering and good luck. -
Lots of emotion and meaning it
I like that
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who is Donald Jefferson? are you really in jail did you really kill him what made you write this i hate the devil i wrote a poem about me and him the title is the devils spite and me you did a great job on this poem good luck in the other contest and great job on the trophy
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great write
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Nice! Excellent message, you really teach that son of a gun a lesson! jk.
Good job!
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ooh - I really enjoyed the passion of this poem. Well done and good luck!
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wow
like the emotions that you show. it is like what i wanted to do to one of my enemies. i like it
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Wonderful
Very well done. Best of luck in the contest
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