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Seasons Haikus

Autumn falls at night
Halloween is here tonight
The night falls to day

Snow falls on winter
Happiness is in this cheer
It melts in the earth

Spring is in the air
Flowers are getting showers
It starts to heat up

Now summer is here
It is warm and lovely here
The seasons repeat

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  • DogFish silver member
    December 13, 2008
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    "The Albino Bat"!
    ...great "nick"!


    thanks for your poems!


  • Catie Sheeran gold member
    November 30, 2008
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    nice string of haikus...lovely write - good luck


  • Samplette gold member
    October 24, 2008

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    Yes, the seasons repeat. Not too unlike life sometimes. Very nice. Thank you for entering the contest.
    Sam