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Secrets No More

There is nothing left to hide.

No more reading in between the lines.

No more questioning what's real.

No more mysteries left concealed.

All I can be is me.

All I will ever be.

I began on a spiritual journey quest.

And, science came along like a welcomed guest.

Opening my mind to something I felt I knew before.

And, everything in the universe that is yet to be explored.

As I open up the universal doors.

All that once were secrets, are no more.

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  • aratidevi
    June 6

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    Nice write. I liked how you incorporated spiritualism with science. Because, science can seem veery materialistic, and the spiritual part of that subject is not really looked into. I loved how you said what is now secrets are no longer that.

    • HaleyMary
      June 7
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      Thanks. You know what's funny? The moment I started reading this kind of science it only made sense to me to combine it with spirituality. Go figure.

      Thanks for reading and commenting on one of my older pieces. Much appreciated.

      Haley Mary

  • Moonlit-Reveries
    April 1

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    Wow I love the powerful message and this is a truth that we all need to learn and embrace. This is so true and very moving. I enjoyed it.

    • HaleyMary
      April 1
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      Thanks. Yeah, it is kind of cool to look into the universe and explore what's out there, eh?

      Thanks for reading and commenting. I appreciate it.

      Haley Mary

  • penman gold member
    October 26, 2008
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    Wonderful

    What a great choice of words. So well crafted and expressive. Thank you for sharing.


  • Tears of Roses
    October 24, 2008

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    I just loved this I think it's one of your very best.
    So deep and moving.
    Roses to you

    Teresa

    • HaleyMary
      October 24, 2008
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      Thanks, Teresa. I wasn't sure about this poem. It isn't one of my scientific or philosophical writes, so I didn't think it was my best work, but glad you enjoyed it. I appreciate the comment.

  • Eyes Wide Shut
    October 23, 2008
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    Ah, I agree with Amera, this is so 'you'. I love it. Great job :]


  • Amera gold member
    October 22, 2008

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    This is wonderful and so very "you". My beautiful sister the Queen of science touches on the spiritual. Want a great poem!

    Love,
    Amera

    • HaleyMary
      October 23, 2008
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      Thanks, Sis. The Queen of science? I think I like that title.

      This is why I love sharing my poetry here. I've been here so long and have shared so many thoughts I feel like people know me here because I open up through my poetry.

      Peace and love.

      Haley Mary

  • Pure Thought silver member
    October 22, 2008

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    I love this !!!!!!!!!!

    NIce answers to questions of doubt. Gotta book mark this one. One of your best.

    • HaleyMary
      October 23, 2008
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      Thanks, Buddy. I honestly don't think this is as good as some of my philosophical writes, but I hadn't written the simple ones about spirituality for awhile and felt like it was a nice change of pace. Appreciate the comment.
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