just this once
don't break my heart
just this once
don't tear it apart
a broken mind
causes so much harm
a broken mind
causes wounds to the arm
just this once
remember my name
just this once
don't play your game
it's been so long
since I felt like this
it's been so long
since that final kiss
just this once
don't break my heart
just this once
don't tear it apart
Author notes
prompt: photobucket pic
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Comments
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I wouldn't revise it, leave it as it is, it is so well written. When I read this it reminded me of a love I lost many years ago. So well expressed.
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Such a beautiful peice I only wish it wasn't so long(five-ten lines). But very well written nontheless.
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