Heaven reflective within my eye ... Drumming silence echoed across evenings sky ... No beginning , no ending ... Fresh , the sounds harmony blending ... As two lips closing forming a smile ... Air meets water , day enters nights while ... I relish, tranquil picture ... For this moment I am richer ... Alive with peace exquisite peace ... A sigh at day's release ... Release into edging night... Humbled with a virginal sense of sight...
A contest entry
- Picture Prompt Sunset by januaryrain.
1200 points, ended November 1, 2008, 10 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Prompt
Comments
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wow....I love the way it just seemed like a thought, yet has such a lovely flow.
well done!
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Wonderful, I really like this, you've captured my thoughts and feelings in this write.
Well done, good luck in the contest.
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And I was just this far from killing a spider! No, I don't have the heart for it (you know I trap them and put them outside if they're not poisonous). This is so pretty, Theresa, you changed my attitude.
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